Bachelor Party
"What a bachelor Party!" thought Paul as he slowly opened his eyes, making sure light wouldn't increase the pain in his shrunken brain head.
He briefly wondered what he would tell his fiance, until he realized the hotel room they had last night didn't have bars on the windows, or plastic sheets on the bed.
Double Cross
"Where is it?" screamed Mike, digging violently through the closet.
"I don't know!" Tasha replied, quickly hiding it in her jeans. Top desk drawer, where she knew it would be.
"I said he wouldn't tell me. Now we have nothing but a corpse!"
"But I need two." thought Tasha, hiding the knife behind her back.
For anybody who wasn't seen the books, 55 word stories are just that. Stories that are just 55 words (excluding the title) no more, no less. Why 55 words? I have no idea, but they are fun to write if you just have a small story idea, and can be surprisingly difficult to write. If you'd like to learn more about 55 word stories, check out Google, because really, I'm not sure it's my job to do all your research for you.
And thank you to Not Worth Mentioning for making me blog of the day. If you found me from there, welcome, have a look around and follow. If you haven't been over there, go check him out. And look, I even provided a link this time.
we had to do awesome lil' short stories like that in my creative writing class. I always loved quick little challenges.
ReplyDeleteI counted the words to control. XD
ReplyDeletereally 55? hmm I doubt that :)
ReplyDeleteThat's a cool idea for a short story. It really forces you to concentrate the very essence of the story into a short paragraph. I still have plenty of words to go in this comment, though. Will I be able to finish it? Why yes, I believe I can.
ReplyDeleteSounds pretty wild :) I will have to look it up.
ReplyDeleteThat would be a real challenge to have a good story with a solid ending with exactly 55 words!
55 word stories sounds interesting. Good job on those.
ReplyDeleteI like might have to start it on my site
ReplyDeletejust enough for someone with ADD
ReplyDeletefantastic concept; keep sharing the beauty, man!
ReplyDeleteThat was smashing mate. Great post.
ReplyDeleteCreative and entertaining. great as always. a3
ReplyDeletePrett interesting idea.
ReplyDeleteTime for a competition on your blog for best 55 word story? :P
ReplyDeletecool story
ReplyDeleteOh hey any time! Love these 55s!!!!
ReplyDeleteThose are nice little stories.
ReplyDeletenice, and lets you think what happened before and after
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theoretically you could write a whole story as the title and finish off with 55 words ^^
ReplyDeleteHmmm i'll give this creative writing experiment a try :D
ReplyDeletesound like a plan to me
ReplyDeleteCool stories, 55 words huh
ReplyDeletei counted the words too!!! lol
ReplyDeleteI was going to, started to lose track though :p
ReplyDeletei like the concept
ReplyDeleteAwesome and funny stories.
ReplyDeleteGood stories - quite a talent to put something together with just 55 words.
ReplyDeleteThis sounds like fun. I wanna.
ReplyDeletevery cool, pushes the creative aspect.
ReplyDelete55 is a random number haha
ReplyDeleteso much to do with 55
ReplyDeleteInteresting stuff. I have always liked short stories, partly because of the short attention span needed, and because it forces the author to cut out unnecessary filler.
ReplyDeleteThat is actually a very legit brainstorming activity for writing ideas.
ReplyDeleteI'm trying to write a novel with a friend and this is awesome and will probably be implemented for when we write a certain type of novel >_>*cough erotica*
ReplyDeleteA friend of mine is named Paul. xD
ReplyDeleteBut that's a interesting concept, pure 55-word stories. I might try fiddling around with that if I'm feeling creative again.
A Texas sized haiku..
ReplyDeleteI liked Bachelor Party, brought back memories.
ReplyDeleteneat story idea writingactivity
ReplyDeleteGood story fellow!
ReplyDeletethe storys just leave you wondering
ReplyDeleteAwesome read man, love the story :D
ReplyDeleteGreat work, welldone!
ReplyDeleteAwesome read, great stories! ;D
ReplyDeletethese are some nice short (really short) stories
ReplyDeleteNice stories and nice format. I should try it someday.
ReplyDeleteAwesome read dude!
ReplyDeleteIs it really a story if it lacks a beginning/middle/end? Still interesting.
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