Mark sits on the couch, playing the game she gave him.
At first, he catches a whiff, a tickle, the shadow of a memory.
Slowly it grows stronger, shadows become images
from months ago.
It's real, it's in the room with him, as if she's sitting there next to him,
like when she'd be driving them home in her car.
Her perfume.
Tests the shirt, the undershirt, the pants.
Nope.
Finally he finds the source, in his socks.
That she washed for him three months ago.
Suddenly the end of their relationship
made perfect sense.
very interesting..
ReplyDeleteAha mark got ownedd ;D
ReplyDeleteWow man did you write this? It is really good!
ReplyDelete3 months ago the relationship Ended but WHY?
ReplyDeletepoor mark :(
ReplyDeleteCool read :)
ReplyDeletegood tale
ReplyDelete...interesting...
ReplyDeleteall that cos of the old socks?
ReplyDeleteWow. I get the concept of the story but I have no idea how their relationship makes sense now x)
ReplyDeletepitty mark...
ReplyDeleteI'm mad my relationships ended over worse things.
ReplyDeletelucky fellow
Very cool!!
ReplyDeleteYou can visit my blog here.
Sometimes my memories tickle me until I pee my pants.
ReplyDeletesmelling the socks from so far away... I see something weird here.
ReplyDeletehaha followed
ReplyDeleteinteresting, i like it
ReplyDeleteGood read.
ReplyDeleteahhh, memories.. what to do, what to do.
ReplyDeletewhat should i say?
ReplyDeleteI've ended relationships for less. haha
ReplyDeletevery good read!
ReplyDeleteMark needs to grow up because theirs millions of women out there :)
ReplyDeleteyou need more moments of clarity if these is how clear you become =D
ReplyDeleteNice little short story, keep op the good work
ReplyDeleteSad and funny, I liked it.
ReplyDeleteo hai mark!
ReplyDeleteDeep is all I can say.
ReplyDeleteI'm mean but this kinda made me lol.
ReplyDeleteThe ending is a puzzle indeed! I'm trying to figure it out!
ReplyDeleteI'll definitely be back to read more like this!
ReplyDeleteNice, you have great literacy skills! Will be anticipating your future posts!
ReplyDeletepoor mark. i really like this poem
ReplyDeletei finally get it!
ReplyDeletehahaha i lol'd
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