Tuesday, September 13, 2011

Another 55

When looking through some stuff I found a few more 55 word stories like the ones I had posted here

So, here's one.


Parade

     He drove slowly down the street, a good 25 miles per hour below the speed limit.  As drivers honked and cursed and swerved around, he gaily honked his horn and waved back, throwing candy to awed gawkers by the street.  The police arrived and hauled him to jail saying, "You can't just start a parade."

20 comments:

  1. lol no, i usually never talk when i record vids. my dog threw up...

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  2. Good story I enjoyed it a lot! To show my approval of said story I'm writing a 55 word long comment to respond to it! This is the half way point of said comment. And now I've run out of things to say. But then again I better stop before I say too much. Donkey.

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  3. Yes you can just start a parade :(

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  4. I really really liked it. I could picture the whole situation in mere 55 words. This has to be a great excercise to get better at story telling.

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  5. hahahahahahhaa.

    *reads Bersercules' comment*

    hahahahahaaahahaha

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  6. hey, don't rain on my parade brofficer. :)

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  7. Hahaha!
    Come check me out =) alphabetalife.blogspot.com

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  8. Funny. I'll have to look at the rest you posted.

    Looking forward to future updates! Follow'd :)

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  9. sounds sad and happy at the same time, that is so good

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  10. Parade starting can get you 5 years, the policee were right:D

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  11. Loved the little story. The ending made me laugh! I could start a parade if I wanted to, mind you!

    I'll be checking often for more stuff like this!

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  12. But officer, parades are so much fun D:

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  13. Reminds of the scene from Black Sheep for some reason.

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  14. Well that was.. 55 words? Thse are pretty cute, actually.

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  15. Parades must be Government sponsored

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