Wednesday, April 27, 2011

Second Impressions

Dom the Entertainer stares at me from his business card.
That cocky smile, the popped collar and suit.
Confidence, Success.
Small town wedding singer.
Excuse me, Wedding Entertainer.
Pity or Hate?  I waffle.
Long term guest comes in.
A drunk, a philanderer.
Looks like the even eyed twin brother of Sloth.
More tales of his awesomeness,
of all the money he'll make.
He finally stumbles back to his room
chuckling dollar signs.
I break down and check Dom's website.
That grammar.
I settle on pity, wish his little dream luck.
The guest?
Maybe something will come up.
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33 comments:

  1. Jesse CrowsApril 27, 2011 at 2:41 AM

    i like your style. keep it up buddy

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  2. Jon TurnerApril 27, 2011 at 2:54 AM

    very evocative ! i like it

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  3. henry23April 27, 2011 at 3:59 AM

    lol, very nice. i like it.

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  4. FangApril 27, 2011 at 4:36 AM

    New blog design, or is it just me?

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  5. MarkeeTeeVeeApril 27, 2011 at 4:50 AM

    Love ur style of writing.

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  6. ✗✗April 27, 2011 at 4:59 AM

    This was really great!

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  7. JayApril 27, 2011 at 5:56 AM

    beautiful!

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  8. apothecarieApril 27, 2011 at 6:04 AM

    I love how you tell a story. It's somehow very personal like reading thoughts, without being like stream of consciousness writing.

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  9. baka1236April 27, 2011 at 6:08 AM

    awesome style of writing man

    short and sweet

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  10. Dav0hApril 27, 2011 at 7:04 AM

    Fucking awesome

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  11. **Hype.Planet**April 27, 2011 at 7:25 AM

    Nice man, love it!

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  12. AlphabetaApril 27, 2011 at 7:54 AM

    Evocative of character.

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  13. fit4lifeApril 27, 2011 at 8:46 AM

    very nice poetry!

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  14. berlinbloggerApril 27, 2011 at 8:48 AM

    Just nice!

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  15. Kicking RocksApril 27, 2011 at 9:32 AM

    im ok with this

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  16. Solsby KidApril 27, 2011 at 10:15 AM

    Great style of writing! Love it!

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  17. Come At Me BroApril 27, 2011 at 10:20 AM

    This is great!

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  18. Lucky13April 27, 2011 at 11:14 AM

    Cool piece! Very eloquent depictions of the characters.

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  19. D4April 27, 2011 at 1:10 PM

    woah, new layout

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  20. ScottDApril 27, 2011 at 2:08 PM

    nice and nice layout!

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  21. Sub Radar (Mike)April 27, 2011 at 2:12 PM

    I cringed at popped collar and suit... who on earth would do that?

    Either way, good stuff man.

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  22. RemiApril 27, 2011 at 4:10 PM

    Extremely unique and flashy style, it's not just a poem, it's a story.

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  23. N4M3L3SSApril 27, 2011 at 4:23 PM

    man my brain loves this

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  24. Hive Mind.April 27, 2011 at 6:17 PM

    This is really well written bro!

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  25. -E-April 27, 2011 at 8:08 PM

    "that grammar" lol. that was the best line IMO.

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  26. 123April 27, 2011 at 8:57 PM

    He'll make it as a big time wedding entertainer

    mark my words!

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  27. KontingencyApril 27, 2011 at 9:57 PM

    interesting as usual. thanks man

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  28. AdaApril 27, 2011 at 11:52 PM

    I really like it, but:

    "That cocky smile, the popped collar and suit.
    Confidence, Success."

    I think the second line is kind of redundant in this case. But overall it's quite nice :)

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  29. Schla.mp3April 28, 2011 at 12:15 AM

    well this is awesome!

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  30. William EdmondsonApril 28, 2011 at 1:58 AM

    Very well written. Looking forward to more.

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  31. JackApril 28, 2011 at 8:51 AM

    This is really nice, good quality!

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  32. Paulie PecansApril 28, 2011 at 10:07 AM

    Excellent prose. Or poetry. Whichever.

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  33. mamtcApril 28, 2011 at 7:19 PM

    quite a writ up..love it

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